Kurumi-chan ([info]kurumi_chan) wrote,
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Story :: Gundam SEED, KiraLacus :: "Once Upon A Time"
I was pretty bored a while ago and so decided to make a KiraLacus fic. :D One good thing about this one is, it matches my LJ title. XD! I don't know, for some reason I dedicate this ficcy to [info]inparusu. >_> I hope it isn't too weird!

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Title: Once Upon A Time
Date: April 22 2005
Fandom: Gundam SEED
Rating: G to PG
Description: Lacus thinks about what would happen if life were really a fairytale. KiraLacus, one shot. The first part is through Lacus’ POV, ten years old. (That’s why her writing is so childish. =_=||) Reviews/comments welcome. Flames welcome tolerated. :P (Oh, and I don't own Gundam SEED. T_T Which is sad.)



Father doesn’t like it when I dream, he really doesn’t. But how can I not? Everything I see makes me think I’m living in fairytale. And, he gives me the books to read anyway. Sleeping Beauty is my favorite one, and when he’s not busy he reads it to me at bedtime. Other times I read it to myself.

My house is like the castle in the book. It’s nice and big and everyone inside has a nice time. Everyone works hard. My house is always clean, especially my room, because I clean it by myself! Father gives me a big hug when he sees it and lets me eat some ice cream-- strawberry, my favorite flavor! But I hardly see anyone sleeping, because I sleep before they do. In the book everyone falls asleep, even on the floor! Isn’t that weird?

Father is the king. He doesn’t spoil me, but he gives me what he thinks is important for me. If I’m good he buys me presents, usually clothes, but when I’m bad, he tells me to be good again because that’s the way he likes me. I always say yes because I don’t like seeing Father sad. When Father is sad I feel sad, too.

I don’t have a Mommy, but if I had, she would be the queen. She’s in a pretty place in the sky where she’s happy. I talk to her, sometimes, when I’m alone, but she never talks back. It’s sad. Maybe it’s because the place she is in is really far away, and her voice is so soft that I can’t hear it.

And I’m the princess. I can sing, like Princess Aurora. I can’t say I’m beautiful, but Father says I am. But a fairy hasn’t come up to tell me that I’ll get pricked by a spinning wheel and die, or even that I’ll just fall asleep. But if my life were a fairytale, a person would tell me that something’s missing. I know what is.

I don’t have any prince in my life yet. I don’t know if I ever will. I don’t care if he’ll be strikingly handsome, or anything that Princess Aurora’s prince is like. But one thing I know is, I’d like someone who really cares about others...

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Lacus smiled as she finished reading one of her entries in her diary. Is that what I thought life was like? she chuckled to herself. She didn’t blame her ten-year old self one bit, though. Life really was peaceful back then. She wouldn’t have expected a war to happen, either.

“Lacus-sama?” a voice called for the pink-haired girl from outside. Foster knocked on her door lightly. “Lacus-sama? A Kira Yamato is here for you,” he told her. He knew that the girl loved the boy’s company, something the old man was happy about.

The blue-eyed girl said cheerily, “Coming!” As she said that, Lacus took her pen and wrote in her neat, cursive writing, on the last page of her diary...

I’ve found my prince.

THE END.


And with that, Lacus closed the book, got out of bed, and started down the stairs.

~ owari ~




EDIT: Thanks to [info]mizu_no_cagalli for noting that Lacus' eye color is blue, not purple. @_@ I should have noticed that!!

Crossposted to [info]gundamseed and [info]fiction_writers



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[info]luinthoron
2005-04-22 08:38 am UTC (link)
This was absolutely beautiful!

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-22 08:43 am UTC (link)
Thank you! ^__^ I'm glad you like it.

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[info]mizu_no_cagalli
2005-04-22 09:37 am UTC (link)
Very sweet! I like it . . . but I think Lacus' eyes are blue ^_^;;

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-22 10:04 am UTC (link)
Waaai, really?! O_O *checks pictures* =_=|| Yeah, they are.. I thought they were a sort of purplish-blue, but apparently they're blue. T_T||

Thanks for reading it! :D I'm glad you like it!

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[info]jgal87
2005-04-22 09:39 am UTC (link)
^^ Very nice... :P Although, I don't really read KiraLacus fic...

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-22 10:04 am UTC (link)
Yay, thanks! :3

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[info]jgal87
2005-04-22 10:05 am UTC (link)
.... I added you to both my Msn and Yahoo messenger

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-22 10:06 am UTC (link)
Yay! :3 I hardly go on MSN anymore, they're not letting me on, but thanks. ^__^ I just added you.

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[info]jgal87
2005-04-22 10:11 am UTC (link)
yeah... seen the message... ^^ You weren't on yahoo? the status is offline...

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-22 10:14 am UTC (link)
Okay, I'll go online now. :D I don't know how long I'll be online, because my Dad and brother might come back any minute.. but sure. ^_^

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[info]jgal87
2005-04-22 10:20 am UTC (link)
^^ I'm mostly on for the day, that is until school started or when my brother is using

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[info]stroberimeteor
2005-04-22 10:50 am UTC (link)
How cute! ^_____^

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 07:03 am UTC (link)
Awww, thanks! ^__^ I thought it would be too..fluffy, you know? @_@

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[info]elaine_lim
2005-04-22 12:05 pm UTC (link)
:D It's beautiful! :D Really dramatic? XD Dunno how to explain it. Nevertheless, pretty cute fic. :D

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 07:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you for saying so! ♥

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[info]fisah
2005-04-22 03:34 pm UTC (link)
That was so nice, I really liked it, and it captured Lacus beautifully, I wish I could see more of your work ^^

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 07:04 am UTC (link)
It did? *_* That’s such a nice thing to say! Thank you so much! ^__^ I’ll make more Gundam SEED ficcies when I have the chance, never fear. ^_~

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[info]lacus
2005-04-22 03:56 pm UTC (link)
Aww T__T So cute! Good job :D

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 07:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! :D I'm really happy that you like it.

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[info]inparusu
2005-04-22 10:29 pm UTC (link)

Dedicated to me? ;________________________________________________________________________________;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!! :Hugs: :Hugs:!! You are so sweet Kurumi-chan!!! This was such a cute story! I can't wait to read more from you!! <3 <3!!!!!!!!!!!!

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 07:05 am UTC (link)
*is hugged* I mean, you’re the biggest KiraLacus fan I know!! ^__^ I felt that I should dedicate it to you, you know? ^^ Thanks, I’ll make more sometime, I just hope they’ll be good enough! :)

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[info]inparusu
2005-04-23 07:07 am UTC (link)

Awww!! Thank you!! ;___; You are so sweet!! Thank you!!!! :HUGHUG!!!:

I feel so touched!! Kurumi-chan I love you!!!!

Hope? they WILL be good enough!! You write so awesomely!!!

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 07:12 am UTC (link)
^__^ No, I'm not sweet! I'm pretty sour, in fact. XD You're welcome! ^__^

Aww, I love you too!! *hugs*

Thanks for the compliment! :DDD (They boost my ego.) Lol. ^_^ Thanks again~~! ♥

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[info]inparusu
2005-04-25 01:57 am UTC (link)

You are sweet :D! But I like sour things! like.. those hard candies you know? XD

Love you!! :hugs: !! <3 <3

Your welcome! I hope you continue writing great stories!

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[info]jgal87
2005-04-23 07:30 am UTC (link)
Kurumi-chan, I'd send my Weiss kruez chapter 3 to you beta-ing... ^^ Do remember to check your mail... ^^ Am eating lunch now

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-04-23 08:10 am UTC (link)
Sure, sure. :D I'm beta-reading it now. ♥

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[info]jgal87
2005-04-23 10:41 am UTC (link)
Received it back ^^ Thankies! Will read through it tonight... ^^

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[info]une_moineau
2005-05-16 02:29 am UTC (link)
Ooh... This is one of my favourite pairings in Gundam SEED, along with Mirallia/Dearka and Mwu/Murrue (so sadddd...) (I can't take athrun/cagalli though- for some reason i just don't like it.)

Lacus as a little girl was so sweeeeet~<3 And the entry does sound like something she would say. It's really in-character, I think. ^^

I didn't know na galing ka rin sa Pilipinas. ^^;;;;;

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[info]kurumi_chan
2005-05-16 09:36 am UTC (link)
Oh, really?! GREAT! ^__^ I used to be mixed up about GSEED.. I thought that Athrun and Lacus would end up together, as well as Kira x Cagalli (that was BEFORE, when I hadn't finished the series.) But, yeah, I love those couplings, too. :D

Thanks, and I'm glad you liked my story. ♥

Eh, bakit ba? What's wrong with being from the Philippines? XDDDD Gah, I suck at my very own native tongue. You too?

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[info]une_moineau
2005-05-16 01:14 pm UTC (link)
I'm just sad that my OTP (Mwu/Murrue) died... T^T

No! Nothing's wrong with it! Contrary, I'm glad, seeing as I hardly know any filipinos here. -_- And since I haven't gone back in such a long time (5 years), I'm glad to be able to talk to someone from there. ;.; *is very happy* ^__________^

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